Our parents grounded us to this room because we got in trouble yesterday. Leni: Linky, if you didnt want to come to my fashion show, you just had to say so! Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room. Nsl Stories - Wattpad QUIET! (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). Bobby: Well, I hope her legs are capable of making up for it. He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. The minute after those words left Luna's lips, the security officer leaned his face in front of Luna's and responded with, "You can help me by letting me into your room. Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. Lincoln: "Thanks, Ms. Mulligan. The Loud House No Such Luck FanficThe Loud House: No Such Luck "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" I wont spend the whole afternoon working up an over sweat in that stupid costume that reeks and doesnt fit me! The siblings began agreeing with that statement, but Lynn Sr. and Rita were frightened. Spell it out alt ending7. And if you do, I'll have you arrested! But that's only because we don't have a room anymore." Lucy: So, that's it then? Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. And we're sorry, but it's been so long since your father and I had time, real time, to ourselves and I guess we got carried away." We wont! "WE HATE DOING ALL THOSE CHORES FOR YOU, YOU FILTHY SLOB!" Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. Sweaty Pants here! Lincoln: No, im your good luck charm! This article should a part 2 episode in Season 5. "The Loud House" No Such Luck/Frog Wild (TV Episode 2017) - IMDb I need to get out of here! (Lynn looks confused.) (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. "But, as usual," Lincoln added, walking towards his parents, "We didn't and as a result you got angry and grounded us." One Squirrel tosses the bat right at Lincoln by accident. Eventually Lincoln had the courage to say something, but was stuttering as he did so, "Areare you saying" he wanted to finished that sentence but felt that he couldn't. They notice the huge mess of items in the yard and are horrified.). Lincoln: Alright, i admit! Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" (cries). ENOUGH!!! And after that, the whole room was silent. She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." I'll admit, it was stupid and wrong of me to lie to them and take advantage of it, and I probably should've just told them that I just wanted some me time, but honestly, I think this is way more than I deserve. Youve ruined my life and made me look like a melting snow cone!! Honey, we're back. (Points at Lynn) Nothing, but a stupid sore loser and a nasty, brainless brute! Morag: Not stuck in your sister's shadows. I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! Things were destroyed or damaged and they saw some people getting tended to for bruises. I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! Lincoln: I hate this! "Room 5," Felix answered with, "On the 11th floor." She hoped the kids would say something, but all they got were grunts of disbelief. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. And with that the family walked out of the spa, the kids still angry and upset and the parents ashamed and disappointed in themselves. ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. ", [The sound of the ball getting hit by the bat is heard and the rest of Lynn's team runs the remaining bases. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. I was being a sore loser! Pulling out his walkie talkie, he said, "This is Hotel Officer Mooresfield. You are about as braindead as you're heartless! One of the Boys alt ending4. I don't want this stupid bunch of brats in my life anymore! It said "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Im going crazy over you." Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! "Well mom, you know what I think?" No Such Luck - Alternate ending - The Loud House Encyclopedia Ruth meant what she said when she said she would get a restraining order, which she did, and to make extra sure the family couldn't go to her, she packed up everything and moved to somewhere in Alaska. Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." "Not cool, guys." I don't need anyone! The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. ", Pep:[dully] "Oh, I have that effect on people. We had no idea this family could be so gullible. The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. Anyway, here's my fanfiction. (Lynn stops) "I forgive you. it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. "Uh, sweetie," her dad said, in a nervous tone, "Think you and Luna can get out of the front seats, so I can drive us home." "I can't believe you," Luna yelled, "I didn't even do anything yesterday and you still decided to ground me for no reason!" I hate that you never listen to reason! Im sick of everything thats happened to me! I feel like a fool!" Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! This response shocked Lynn Sr. and Rita, Aunt Ruth was someone they could rely in case they went out of town and couldn't trust their kids to be home alone, hearing her say she doesn't want them anywhere near her home made them very worried. Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? I'M A STUPID, SENSELESS BULLY!!! That's not how it works in the hotel. They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! As long as I know that it'strue, I wouldn't let this stop me from loving you, or anyone else. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. . divine001 on Tumblr (The family gets more and more heartbroken as he continues to rant.). SQUIRRELS WIN!" You love baseball. But I'm not entirelyinnocent myself." And once again, computer typing was heard and, after a couple minutes, she got her answer. ", Baseball Announcer: "The windup, the pitch. Today I'm doing a new story called 'Hall Monster Linka,' as you can tell this a story that features Linka Loud and her brothers. And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). Lana: Gee. Morag: well, if you insist I suppose. Angus: Oh do tell. "Now I want an explanation," the man started with, as he stomps a few steps toward them, "As to all of this. Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. Lincoln: yeah. Why are you being arrested?! Lori: No, this is literally a terrible beach trip and I want to go home! Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" Luan added. "I can't believe you kids just did that," Rita said, tears running down her face like a river. ), Lincoln: (to the viewers) " I can't believe they actually locked me out the house, which is also my home. Lincoln asked his parents. Head Poet's Anxiety alt scene12. Lincoln: (points to the window) "The window. The heat increases. (Lincoln, without hesitation, hugs her, with the rest of the sisters joining in for another group hug. We didn't find any though." "What," Felix said, "what is it?" This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." Also it is part Satire, so most of the behavior of the Characters appearing here may not be their usual self's. If you like all the Revenge-Fics who like to torment Lincoln's family and/or present his . Rita shouted, as she and Lynn Sr. became shocked. Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! [Lynn Sr. teared up and he burst into tears at the heartwarming moment.] On the other end, Maddie, an African-American woman in her mid-20's with short curly hair, heard what Felix said and got worried. But seriously, we made a mess of everything! During the drive, there was nothing but silence, which is very uncommon for a vehicle that is usually occupied by 13 people. We know we don't deserve it, but we hope you can forgive us! The sound of typing on a computer was heard for a few minutes. Loud House, No Such Luck sequel - YouTube Rita: Kids, your friends are here. As they leave, Jeffrey grabs Lynn Sr.'s arm, making him and his wife turn to him, he added, "And just so you know, your kids tore apart my lobby and the room you were staying in. [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. I would feel awful if you did. I can take being kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, butbeing locked out of my own home?! The siblings had their arms either crossed on their chest or on their thighs in a wing stance, but they were all glaring at their parents. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). "They're not the only guilty ones," Lynn, the girl in red with brown hair tied in a ponytail, responded back with, in a bit of wise-cracking tone, "Yesterday, Lana and I broke the elevators. They felt nothing but guilt and shamein their hearts, even the goth child who claims to not have one. Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? ", Pep:[downright bored] "I think I've wasted my life. This proves it. NO!" I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. Lynn: Put that suit back on Lincoln! Wow, Lincoln, I'm really sorry. Theres nothing lucky about it! Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! As the last of the guests ran away, Leni, the blonde girl that one of the guys mentioned earlier, came around the corner and saw her family in the spa. Lincoln: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! "First of all, don't shout at me!," the woman said, in a tone that made Lola be quiet, "Second, if you give me a second, I'll sort this out some more." ", Lincoln: "Because your my sister." (The rest of the family is enjoying their time with beach activities), Lincoln: (takes off his sunglasses, deeply annoyed) But unfortunately only when im in the squirrel suit(puts the head back on), (Several moments pass. I'm not. (Tears up) Our only bro. At least this thick skin won't let me down! Its a stupid mascot costume! Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. No Such Luck / Frog Wild. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck - DeviantArt ", Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! This feels like a bad episode from a show thats running out of ideas. Lincoln: (off-screen) Where are you going Luce? SQUIRRELS WIN! "And just remember," Lori said, and then she and her siblings yelled one last time, "WE HATE YOU!" Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". Also, any negative comments or comments suggesting that I'm trying to paint the siblings in a bad light will be deleted and I will block you. (Inhales, then exhales) "I. ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! And you better start talking now!". Not you or Lucy. The Louds. We didn't just barge into the room. No Such Luck part 2. I messed up and maybe i did want to support some of you guys! She started pacing the room, or more specifically around the couch. I don't even care about that anymore. (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! I heard you scream! Especially Lynn. * They thought that if they did or said something that this man didn't like, he would turn them to stone with his glare. "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. Lincoln: No! I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! TLH: Scoop Snoop (Alternate Ending) by LuisLoudestFan on DeviantArt Except for Lynn). Do I mean nothing to you? I got to find somewhere to hide! ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Lincoln: Now THAT'S bad luck for you, you brainless nitwits!! Speaking of, I plan to do another alternate ending to another Loud House episode, the ending for it might have been wholesome and good, I just feel that the events that happen in the episode could've been prevented if the siblings did this, that's all I'm going to say. He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. Someone at front desk please respond." Let's go! Lead walls will keep my bad luck from affecting anyone. Everyone turned to the doorway and saw the Loud kids standing there, red with rage and ready to destroy. Rita: (Gasps) Lincoln! Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! I hate that you don't love me anymore! Let me tell you this! Status Update. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myself fell for such bologna. (The other sisters come over onto the main couch. Lynn Sr.: KIDS, please! "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." Slamming the sliding glass door shut, he turned around and glared at everyone in the room. "But she's still family," Rita added in, "And family stick together no matter what." You didn't deserve to win that stupid game or any game! Guess they forgot to lock the windows. "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" I need a very big, long rest from them. (Meanwhile, back on the beach, the family has gathered together, feeling very ashamed and humiliated. He staggers inside, weak and collapsed. Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. The Loud House: Suite and Sour (Alternate Ending) - DeviantArt Luan: We're sorry we sold all your stuff! After a minute, "Hello," the gruff sound of their Aunt Ruth was heard. she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. Then, he opened it up. (he goes to the living room window. Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! I get that i was pretty stupid myself to spread that stupid fib, i should have just opened up! This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. But right now, no! I don't want you quit something you love because of me. See if I care! 'What did he mean there's a massive storm heading her way?' Takes place in the middle of the events of the infamous episode No Such Luck. All of you!" She playfully rolled her eyes. Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. [takes the mask off]"I was here the whole time! 5 months of research ruined. I'm giving it a Teen rating, because while there is no serious violence in this story, there are still some moments that might not be comfortable for youngsters to have to read (primarily shouting and lots of it). His choreography is so dated. My coffin. You can never come back. Ive often helped feed your pets and come to your stunt moves. #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . "Gross and immature, if you ask me," Lola said, also glaring at her parents. Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. Now we've broken the shower." Hahahaha! Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. He flies over to her and onto her hand.) Lola yelled. They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. No pun intended. The parents shook their heads up and down rapidly and nervously, the thought of being arrested terrified them and they couldn't stand the thought of being separated from their kids. "Yeah, brah." (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! I hate boring science lectures! The last one he is shown reading has the Ninja Steel Rangers from Power Rangers Ninja Steel on the cover. She then turned around, along with the other siblings, and glared at their parents. Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. Lana: *Gasp* All my pets are now homeless! "So you thought that the best way to find a ghost, which I know for a fact aren't haunting this hotel, was to knock out your air conditioner," the man said, as he gestured to the hole that once had an air conditioner there, "Do you realize how ridiculous and stupid you sound right now?" Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. I MESSED UP!!! Lola: If it wasn't for Miss. If he losses, he doesn't blame me or my other friends. All of a sudden another 6-year old wearing a princess gown snatched the walkie talkie out of Felix's hand and said, "All right lady. I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? alternateending stpatricksday theloudhouse lincolnloud theloudhousefanfiction stpatricksday2022 Requested by austin2468. The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). Lynn Sr. asked. [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! Journal. They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) Luna spots Lincoln). ", Lincoln: "Still, I wish I would've just told you guys the truth, then maybe none of this would've happened. Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! SO I DEMAND AN EXPLANATION!" This time, it's the infamous "No Such Luck". Leni: *Gasp* My Sewing Machine! Lucy. Just a heads up, there are moments of severe anger and shouting, so if you don't like either of these then I'd recommend reading something else. They got their answer when, suddenly, the door the spa was kicked open by someone's shoe. You can't ground us, we're the parents!" Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. ], Family: "CONGRATULATIONS! Lincoln: Throughout my life, ive been teased, laughed at, kicked out of rooms, blamed, grounded for petty reasons and done so many humiliating deeds for all of you! We need to follow them, they have to be Lincoln's! ", Lisa: "And if it's any consolation, you weren't the only one who should've thought about what you were doing. I feel like a fool! After a few moments of static, a female voice was heard on the other end, "Hello, Felix. Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. ", Rita: "I think we heard enough. Right now." While eating breakfast, Lincoln learns from his sisters that they have planned activities later in the day. It was against the law. Lisa: Easy, easy! My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. I can't believe I told him to back away from his own home! Youve made your point! Lola: Hey, Lincoln . I can't believe they said they'd tease you for eternity. Also, her kids weren't wrong about the pudding, that stuff was so vile it would turn her stomach into a BMX dirt track for days, so the kids' decision had its positives after all.